Miss Freckles

I turned my head to the right when the house came into sight, half expecting Marcus to shoot through the trees with some fifteen robbers on his heels, but there ...

oh i think i know who the narrator is, maybe fate or destiny or something? hmm, good introduction, although maybe you should start with a scene where something actually happens, ...

no don't scrap it! it's an amazing story for a fifteen-year-old (sorry, but i know what i've been doing at 15... and that's embarrassing compared to this) :) btw does ...

yep, i agree with ashley wholeheartedly. surprising and lovely to read :) only thing i noticed: Her thin lips curled themselves delicately into a smile that's a bit awkward, how ...

ohh, nice, very fluent, very my style! i'll go and read the next part... now!

MORE GREEN RiBBONS Marcus’ horse danced lightly through the scattered trees to get to me. He greeted the other men along the way, but I could see in the heightened ...

Night crept with the lavender fingers of dusk. this is where i stopped reading (then i went back, but only with the intention of giving you a more detailed review) ...

hmm, the flashback at the beginning confused me as well (it's not clear that it is one! put it in italics or something to distinguish from the rest) and then ...

mf trips over her own feet and falls into the tavern, right into the free seat opposite a tall, dark man who is sitting there with a half-empty mug. "godda ...

bell mt for serious stuff and nichtlusdick for random stuff (you'll find it on go to "computer" then "font")

anonymous, or the band muse

i'm actually writing a serious thing at the moment. i will probably hit the 200 pages soon, i only need to fit in some small parts, and i'm waiting for ...

yay, another random person *scatters lemon pie all over thread*

i have friends who make awesome avvies and banners and who are happy to make them for me. the one i have at the moment i found on the internet ...

1. i'm either completely random or completely serious. everything inbetween is small talk and that's not acceptable! 8) 2. i don't use capitals except for emphasis. 3. even when i ...